awesome lyrics and good animation, but the voice was too breathy. I spose choir has made me a picky about these things, but the voice was just too timid. Could be a lot better if the voice was strong.
seems great so far, looking forward to seeing the finished product
i dont understand at all what just happened. More content next time?
shows some real skill, i could never do it.
Put a plot in one of these and you've got a winner.
thats adorable. amazing job. good art good music good everything. AWWWW
how the hell did so many of these make it past...well anyone. this is crap. its short. they all look like mashed potatoe sculptures. theres no background. its all one shot. sorry to say, but crap
Lots of people may laugh at this but i think your doing a good thing.
nice job, might want more characterized bubbles, or something.
ya it took me like 5 minuets to design the charactors. thanks for the review.
Too bad you can't my friend! Clocks took care of that!
umm popeye on steroids?
ya i forgot about popeye and the huge forearms, oh well
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